1、(a)软弱、羞怯的：If you think Ican fill the position after you have read my letter,I shall be glad to talk with you.读完此信后倘您认为敝人可补缺，敝人愿和您一谈。 (b)改写后(较佳)：If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you,I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you,so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
2、(a)怀疑，不妥、不安全的：If you're interested,let me know immediately,as I'm sure and interview will convince you I'm the man for the job.倘贵公司有兴趣，请即告知，敝人深信与您面谈可以使您相信，敝人适合担任此职。 (b)改写后：May Ihave an interview?You can reach me by telephone at Taipei 884525 between the hours of 7-9a.m.and 5：30-9：30p.m.any evening.可否赐予面谈?您可在每天上午七至九时，下午五时半至九时电884525号。
3、陈腐的句子：Hoping you will give me an interview,I am…(我希望您惠予面谈)Anticipating afavorable decision,I wait your…(等候您的佳音)Trusting your reply will be satisfactory,I remain(静候满意的答复)
4、哀求式的'句子，不够完整(漏掉面谈时间)：Won't you please give me the chance to interview your?I can be reached by calling Kenmore 69781.恳请惠予面谈。请打电话K-69781 (b)改写后：May Ihave the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you?My telephone is Kenmore 69781.You can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day.可否惠予面谈以便进一步商讨?我的电话是K-69781。我从上午九时到下午五时都可接通。
5、太过自信的句子：I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 731430.我深信面谈可以证实我的话。您可在每天下午二至四时(星期二例外)打731430号电话通知我。
6、较具体有效的句子。May Ihave an interview?My residence telephone is(042)4398.You reach me by calling that number until June 30.After July 2,my address will be Kent House,Bretton Woods,New Hampshire.可否惠予面谈?我住处电话为43981号。六月三十日以前我都在上址，七月二日以后，我的新址为新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。
Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the April 10 Student Daily interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.
According to the advertisement, your position requires top university, Bachelor or above in Computer Science or equivalent field and proficient in Windows NT4.0 and LINUX System. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating() from Graduate School of Tsinghua University this year with a M.S. degree. My studies have included courses in computer control and management and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual InterDev and SQL Server.
During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only the have I passed CET-6, but more important I can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to write and speak English is out of question.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
With many thanks,
2. 最好用打字的 打字是写求职信最佳的选择，如果真需要用手写也必须用钢笔和原子笔，蓝色和黑色是最佳选择。
3. 内容简明、文笔顺畅… 简明扼要的内容和通顺流畅的文笔，是求职信必要的原件，但最重要的要素，还是以正确的文法表达出讯息，平实顺畅地表达出来…
I wish to apply for a position with your company as a regional sales manager. Iam twenty-nine years old and at present employed by the Xishan Company,where I have been working as an assistant manager for the past four years. Before that, Ihad spent three years as a sales agent in the Taiji Company.
My oniy reason for leaving my present position is to better myself as I feel I have potential(潜力) for greater things. I wish to serve in a large company like yours so that I can learn new things and give full play to my talent.
I can give you references from both of the firms mentioned above as to my character and ability. Enclosed please find my resume.
I would appreciate your considering my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Now and then corporations send out feelers for just the right type of creative person. This person must fit very specific criteria. Usually, after all is said and done, the corporation wants a business person who can manage, create and communicate. A seasoned professional who"s been around for a while.
If you"ve been looking for this rare combination of business savvy and design expertise, my background might interest you:
Ten years of working experience. Solid background in the management of creative up-and-comers.
Know new technologies that show instant profit, such as CAD/CAM.
This is but a brief summary of my abilities. And there is much, much more to share.I feel I have strong marketable skills in which you would be interested. Please contact me if you would like to hear and see more.
I am xx xx college graduates, to join your school.
Moment in the university four years, according to the "professional, thick foundation, wide strong ability, high quality" standard to exercise and develop themselves, in constant learning and practice to improve their comprehensive quality, has put himself into a solid professional skills, perfect knowledge structure, strong ability to adapt, rich in the spirit of collaboration era youth.
I believe that the future society need is highly qualified inter-disciplinary talent, successful learners in fully realize the value of the book at the same time, should also recognize the book has no value. So I'm learning, actively participated in various extra-curricular activities, such as "computer society" and "mathematical modeling", etc. All these activities help me to improve their ability of computer operation and team cooperation ability.
Dear Mr Ho
Application for the position of Head Nurse
In response to the advertisement on January 4 in the JobsPower.com, I have sent my application for your consideration.
I hold a Bachelor of Science in Nursing. The course has provided me the formal training necessary to be a nurse. Besides, I possess ten years of extensive experience ranging from Nursing Assistant to Nursing Supervisor at XYZ Hospital. My responsibilities include patient assessment and staff development, as well as the coordination of other health care services such as dietary, food nutrition, physical therapy and pharmacy.
I believe my strong clinical background and experience make me a valuable asset to your hospital. I would be pleased to attend an interview.
Thank you for your consideration.
Designer Resume Template
266 Coldspring Rd.
Atlanta, GA 31196
To obtain a position with a strong, forward thinking, progressive company were I can fully utilize my knowledge and experience as a designer.
1997: Awarded Special Mention Prize. "ICSID/ Compiegne Industrial Design Award", France, for co-design of a "Portable Office Project".
Guest Lecturer, Industrial Design, University of Georgia.
Certified in CAD and in Architectural Drafting.
Human Factor for product design.
Human computer interface design.
CDRS(Pro/Designer), Pro/E, TDI, AutoCAD, Form Z, Strata 3D, Infini-D, Corel Draw, Adobe Photoshop, QuarkXPress, Adobe Illustrator, HyperCard,
Persuasion, MM Director.
Harris Technologies, Atlanta, GA
Product Designer, 1998 - Present
Developed critical transmissions, performance monitoring, and diagnostics firmware (C, ASM) for broadband hybrid fiber/coax telecommunications network (TDMA receiver/transmitter). Documented interface/design and maintained MR ("modification request") handling/response.
A & S Industries, Augusta, GA
Manager, Telephone Products Division / Manager, Advanced Product Design, 1994 - 1998
Hired as manager of Telephone Products, and later promoted to manager of Advanced Product Design, I was responsible for all new product design.
Provided key technology enhancements to multiple product lines. Designed full product line including machines rated superior to all others by Consumer
Reports, helping to increase company sales from $42.3 to $71.8M in one year.
B.A. Design, 1994
University of Vermont, Burlington, VT